not a pretty girl

so... i like inking, can you tell? i've taken to trying to do real inking stuff with vectors. but i'm an amateur and i've never actually done serious crosshatching and things, so please, tell me what's wrong with this i'll post a coloured version later, i just want some feedback on the drawing. title is an ani difranco reference. (i ain't no damsel in distress, and i don't need to be rescued-)